Oh my gawd i am crying and that was like totally fake man that was amazing! Damn...I was about to rant and rant on and on again how you should just stay alive! But i dont think you prob need that xD Well rea;;y if you ever need someone i will be there for you. But this was really like a piece of work...i can see this note be written actually! So i guess three cheers to the people HOPFULLY in a better place now...!!! But really amazing job! I could pass you off as one of those acting authors :D But you know i feel this way actually and its not an act, im just hiding behind this mask, trying to escape the world of mistakes.

Keep up the amazing Job :)

CourtneyxHolland
Take Care
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Very good.. it has a nice flow to it and just really goes together. I like the message and know there are many people out there who feel that way and who knows with this one poem you could help someone else. Great job!

Beck

Wow.... for your first suicide one its really well done!!!! it amazing and so real and powerful... it was well worded..and AMAZING

well dont and keep up the good work

take care
xoxo

Amazing poem... and you said it was just a good subject? don't get me wrong.. i am really amaze by the plot and everything.. One of the best poems I read.

Keep it up...

This is a really good poem. its amazing that you can take a topic like this and put so much feelings into it like it was how you really felt or something. good job. also really sad poem.

I have the same feeling when it comes to poems about suicide. I used to cut, but I stopped. Since then, writing about suicide satisfies my desire to end it all, but I would never try to end it again. I feel you on this one.

Wow...this was really good!..u put so much emotion, i can feel ur emotion even if it is fiction...wow!!..ur a great poet!!..great job!!
Aly

I know it wasn't ture i mean how would u write new poemes,but that was a good poem it's very deep

Wow, really deep, and well written, I love it. 6/5 lol.

This poem was really well written.
and I have actually took the time to read all of your poems.
I happened to read this one last.

Your authors note said it was fiction.
Just to let you know hunny, people write about what they feel and it affects them and so forth,(and many other reasons) I thought you were a talented writer but I have noticed one thing. the format on most of your poems are either very very similar or exasperately different. your a fake.

Amazing poem well done.
flowed really well!!!
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