Unfortunately this I cannot sway.
gashes and slashes covering my body
--hope this isnt true
sad description of yourself
but good poem

Wow u look down apon urself to much but it was a nice poem

I know its 1 of my many probs

Overall i like how you contridicted your physical and emotional self. I am sorry you have had to experience that many problems though, trust me i know how you feel.

Thanks i needed that

I loved your poem!!! i can relate big time
the part about gashes and slashes!!! I mean!!

I really enjoyed it!!! the slashes and gashes part made me sad but i can relate. ive been "clean" since november so i can give u advice if u want.

i really liked the line...

"cold as ash looking into the soul.
my eyes no one can bare."

i thought it was very discriptive and awesome!!! keep it up!! n im here if u ever need 2 chat!! =]

5/5

Wow you sound down and lots of other thing sometimes i feel that way but you dont always have to be down just look at th good things in life.........

Dude that is such an AMAZING poem

It was a wonderful poem.
It's sad, but ya...

Wonderful description.
I'm sorry you feel that way about yourself...

'cold as ash looking into the soul.
my eyes no one can bare.'

Beautifully written.
This is 'bleeding emotion.'

=]] Wonderful job!!!

5/5!!

Keep it up!

--**Skye~

It was a wonderful poem.
It's sad, but ya...

Wonderful description.
I'm sorry you feel that way about yourself...

'cold as ash looking into the soul.
my eyes no one can bare.'

Beautifully written.
This is 'bleeding emotion.'

=]] Wonderful job!!!

5/5!!

Keep it up!

--**Skye~

So short but length doesn't determine if your message is shared or not.Very good job 5/5

Very good poem. I like your expression...

WOW! that i very sad,but i understand it. i do the same thing, i mean use to...cut myself. and i would feel all these things like grief, pain, and love. so i understand. i loved this poem 5/5

You got a excellent way of putting things down
13 wow i love to see what you will be writting
at 23 another 5 vote here if you read one of my
poems read < I am your disease> I think you
will relate kinda one of my crazy ones

Terrible, I'm laughing. Stop attempting to grow up before your time.