Very nicely written. i get the message of this piece and i really liked the structure of your piece. And i like the idea of the poem too. the flow was nice and your choice in vocab was well picked out. 5/5 :]

Wow, this poem has a meaningful message huh.. I like it!! 5/5

Oh, i love this poem

What will it take for happiness to be found?
What will it take for the dream to be but a mirror image?
--like how you end in a question for the reader
every line in this poem had such meaning
well done

Great job, a very heartfelt message here. You had great words that flowed nicely and every line was right from the heart. I loved every bit of it, so nice job! Take care! :)

I enjoyed the read and the story line was one of common ground. I was wondering if perhaps you might try the last line as:
"What will it take for the dream to not be, but a mirror image?"

Wow!
this short poem is awesome!
and I really like it!
It tells about that life is not always happiness
happiness is hard to find..
well, 5/5

More like a quote
but beautiful non the less

thank you for your comment
i love comments from good poets
:]

Wow this poem is very meaningful and has a ton of imagery. its very well written, short, but it has a powerful message. really good. 5/5 =]

Lovely 5/5

A very nice short written piece with meaning loved it 5/5