This is my 1st poem,, can u plz give me ur opinoin,,thank u

Nice work Sara...I liked ur poem a lot..it was short but good..keep it up

Keep writing you are a natural.

5/5!

I loved the iroy in it and the strange logic , to get out but not acutaly get out !!

i think it is a short one , can nto say it si a poem fully ,

you need to knwo sotmhign dont make a 1 block poem always plit them into paragraphs,
and make the ryming more improtant and work on it more ,
it would be perfect it this poem would be longer and more ryming and structured ,
but as frist poem i belve , it si a very good start , since you expressed your feelings ina very great way , !!

soo , waiting , your next

encouragment:)

It was really good i liked it.

Becasue we love

becasue you love

love is not a selfish

love not = own you

becasue i love you i will sacrifice for you to be happy

remmber those girl

Amazing for your first one!!! keep it up! :)

Wow, this poem is so touching.
It is your first but really it was nice.

Short n sweet n up to the mark of a love poem. Good word choice n lovely flow. Its very romantic with a sad element. tc

Short, simple, and sweet! sometimes these are the poems that speak the loudest good job! 5/5

Very nice sarah... Keep writing more and just be natural... I like it.. 5/5

Very nice it really shows how life really is loving someone and them not loving you back....

Love this so short but sweet and meaningfull

This is so sadyet beautiful at the same time, 5/5. Em

Great one dear , 5/5

nice name , i wounder if my eternal ex would say the same if she had a choice to meet me face to face , i might be living for dat day :)

Its really good so sad love can be so cruel

**plz comment bak**

It's cute

I thought this poem was sad relatable and written beautifullly written good job keep writing

Drowning words i commented back