Wow, i am really amazed. i loved it alot.

"I lost track of everything
Its all gone with you
Love .. Life .. Meaning
All I have got left is my faith
Its what keeps me sane
What pulls me from drowning deep in this pain

Lying there on the shallow ground
I can feel the cool breeze of the night against my face
And can almost hear the stillness of the darkness
So I closed my eyes and wished upon the countless stars
Prayed for God to save me "
that's exactly me when i feel lost everything, only my faith and praying to God what keeps me sane.

"But as I fell further into the dusk
I witnessed a miracle
An angel shining like a star
Wrapping the atmosphere with warmth and cordiality
Opened my eyes
Whispered into my ears
Words so strange but yet came with such ease
"Awaken from this dream
Awaken to this life for your time is still not done
Fill your heart with hope and learn to love again "
And with the blink of an eyelash he was gone"

this the spot of change the spot of light, you wrote it in very nice way and chose a good position for these lines

" breathed in slowly and realized that the pain was gone
Only to be replaced by an overpowering feeling
A feeling I have yet not experienced but still it felt familiar
"Hope"
It is what I saw in the angel's eyes
What kept me alive for all this time
What allowed me to survive
What will heal my scars
And help me live again
To finish my part in this mysterious novel they call life"

very good ending indeed, you gave yourself and readers a hope for this life and showed that it's not too late as long as you are still alive

well done

Excellent job. I love your ended to this poem you did an good job 5/5

-Its all gone with you
Love .. Life .. Meaning -
that was my favorite part. if i m not wrong, you put a lot of emotion in this one.
you just seem to have the words to touch people.
5/5 keep writing n_n

OMG!!!!
wow this is one of ur bests
really amazing
keep on writing :)

Wow. this poem blew me away. it was amazing! so many emotions packed into one poem, very creative. so pure and so different from anything else i've ever read. this is deff going in my favorites! you did a wonderful job on this. a very beautiful piece. job well done. 5/5.

=Ashlei.

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5