Part of a song. wow it would be beautiful in a song it really would. i found it very touching its great hun.

Wow that's great! I wish i could hear the whole song. Can you sing? :)

Excellent!!
this is deff song material!!
now i wonder, can u sing? that wuld be awsum, wish i could lol.
nice job tho!

Wow you have a lot of potential. liked the poem 5/5

Wow, this is amazing (: