This is rather..breathtaking. First of all, i adore the structure. it's just...it's different. there were a couple rhymes that sounded a bit forced, but other than that it was lovely. I loved the last...stanza/paragraph. it was just gorgeous, really. and the last line, vocabulary!!!! lol. wonderful job, m'dear.

Wow, deep

"And yet I feel the doubt creeping upon me, exploding and covering the surface, seeping into the crevices, falling drop by drop into my bloodstream, mingling with my blood and playing with my heart and mind.. I see the mirror, I hear the envy, but all I feel is desolation. There is a boundless universe of emotion, and I feel so much of them and then none of them at all. I know nothing, and it scares me. But I know so much more than this... I know that, but in comparison, I still know nothing."

Though you wrote this part paragraph style, it was my favorite part, I think it was because you let go and didn't try to force rhymes, it just felt like you were spilling your inner thoughts. Keep practicing and working on it, you definetely have potential.

I really like this one alot too you got some really great work here keep it up :)

Wow! amazingly written!
Very, very powerful!
5/5 for sure!!

U are, indeed, a poet. ur words contain meaning. they grasp u and spin a tale that is deep and inviting. thank u for inviting the reader into that. deep and insightful

good job

Great job, lots of emotions are in your poem and you wrote such powerful words. Nice work, and take care! :)

I loved it! I thought it was deep, from the heart, and was the truth. Another amazingly well written poem : )

I loved it! It was truthful, sorrowful, dark and completely amzing at the same time. You've got a great gift. =)