Wow!!!
Very good flow.
And this is the type of poetry I love to read, because it touched something inside me.
AMAZING!!!

I like this, all of it had a good flow

the ending was the best, you described how it will be when karma does its job

I give you my love, trust, body, soul, and heart
And all you do is try to rip them all apart!
--very sad hun
good work

I liked this. i lved that it flowed so very well! I love everythingso i cant say what i loved the most....wow is all i can say..this piece has left me speechless.....5/5

This poem is so amazing...
>I will try to take you with me and you'll walk away
I tell you that i will stay and you tell me Never.
I give you my love, trust, body, soul, and heart
And all you do is try to rip them all apart!<
My favorite part...
Great work...keep writing...

Ohhhh,, i just luv it<3 <3 <3
its soo strong and i like the flow
i luv the last part also its so touchyyy
keep it up
5/5
lili

I really liked it . had a lot of emotion. reminded me of my bestfriend and i. except i regret meeting her.

Amazing job! Love the story! ^_^

*~BrittBratt~*