Mirror Mirror

by kiya colebrook   Jun 1, 2008


Everytime i hear his voice
i see a smile on my face
but when his voice dissapaers
so dose my smile
and i feel the hurt and see the pain
as my eyes drft back to the mirror
that shows my true thoughts,
my true reflection,
me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I can see the potential of your poem, but maybe you can expand on it ^_^ If you add a bit more, I think the emotions will be able to get to the reader a bit more, y'know?

    Other than that, I think you have a great idea ^_^ Keep working at it and i'm sure you'll be an amazing poet in no time
    4/5

    UzumakiPride
    --Hatori

  • 17 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Nice job