Really nice poem!

Thanks its my first one

Oh my gosh i love it this is so true... i love the flow its great, and the words that you rhymed were creative very very good... 5/5

Different lol ((5))

Nice, you gots the talent, the flow is good, now the stanzas are the key to making it great. just dont be like me and be the worst speller lolz

Very nice write for someone of your age! keep up the good work!

That was a really great poem

give it a different format

i give it a 5/5

I really liked it.It was short but to the point keep writting i would like to see you grow as a writter!((5)):D

Wow great poem
i loved it
thats one of the best ive ever read
great job
ur a great writer
5/5

Wow.. nice sounding.. well thought.. very good.. keep it up!!!...

This is good poetry, keep on doing what you do. 5/5

Wow, very good.
If it was longer it could make a good song =]]
Haha.

It flowed well, like a stream itself. =]]
It was strong and good. =D
5/5!

Great job!!!

-Please, check out some of my poetry =]]-

--**Skye~

I LIKED IT GREAT JOB!

For your first poem it was really well written.....i liked the rhyming keep up the great work!!!

This is amazing. I LOVED it. GREAT JOB!

keep writing!

--Hannah