I really like this piece. Iam speechless......

Top job. Keep it up.

This was very good and i reall enjoyed reading it but i think with your talent of writing other should be jealous and want to be you

i know i wish i had your talent.

keep it up 5/5

Hey i loved this. i can totally relate as well. we always want what we cant have and there will always e characteristics in people that we wish we had thats just life. i loved the emotion shown in this poem. the need to belong was so strong. it was sad and it made me think lol so great poem