Comments : My walls

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    My walls are built with no locks or doors, and windows from which to view the world
    Not a glimpse or a glimmer inside these walls
    Unless invited no entry allowed
    What a privilege to look inside and behold my mind

    Loved these lines a lot.A safe haven our mind is where refuge we can find.We observe things around us and retreat to our secret place where nobody can interfere but of course "unless invited".
    Very nicely written insight to ones own thoughts.

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    That was all so true because we all need a place to go sometimes where we can just escape and find ourselves again, sometimes the world just becomes so much to deal with that we just need time to the walls that are our own. well done, loved reading it!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    8:30 am --4:30 pm

    My walls are built with no locks or doors, and windows from which to view the world
    Not a glimpse or a glimmer inside these walls
    Unless invited no entry allowed
    What a privilege to look inside and behold my mind

    Grant My good friend, I have a simular box with walls of leatherand steel but there are certain spots built with the finest silk.
    My true friends have woven the fibers and when I feel the gentle imprint of their presence I once again know it is time to receive their warm embrace, for they are the very craftsmen that strengthen my fortress and supply the comforts within my walls

  • 15 years ago

    by adroit

    Great poem. There is so much meaning in it. Very powerful, flowing poem, like like a river after week-long rain. Awesome writing. Honest Luck

    Sarah