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by TwistedAngel xx Jun 4, 2008 category : Love, romance / lasting love
No one can hurt you Or throw you to the ground Nothing can make you cry Not while I'm around No one can touch you This is what I have found Nothing can make you sad Not while I'm around No one can harm you Or make you feel unsound Nothing can make you sigh Not while I'm around No one can do anything to you Unless they go through me Not while I am around thank you I will love you eternally (C) TwistedAngelxx 4th June 2008 Written for a contest, based on the Sweeney Todd song of the same name. That movie rocks!
by Sourav
Very rhythmic and fluent poem. Liked the the easy flow of it. Good write!
by Ash
Amazing poem! I loved the repetition and the simplicity behind this one. You are so easily able to convey feelings even through simple words. Excellent work! 10/5 from me.
