Sweet vanilla ice queen

by Ahmed Ali   Jun 4, 2008


You
i like
silhouette
i see i see
you are a beauty
of mesmerizing ice
but neither cold or bitter
nothing in life can be sweeter
i feel hot and i feel weird
my body is frozen
i'm heavy in fear
can't move
disappear
i hate
me

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ahmed Ali

    Thank you! btw, I forgot to mentio nthat it can also be read from bottom to top!

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Nice write!!It says a lot without actually saying it.