Comments : The Perfect Place

  • 15 years ago

    by Singthesorrow

    Very real.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a happy love poem and did not strike me as cliche. It was real and every word alive inside, I think you pinned this perfectly. The rhyming did not seem forced and everything flowed like a carefree melody.

    Beautiful work dear, keep it up.

    Take care!

    ~MaryAnne