It's funny

by 0osomedayo0   Jun 7, 2008


Love
thats funny
as if everything is perfect in the world...
its not.
laughing like its ok.
smiling like u didnt fall asleep in tears
love
empty words
overused
underfelt
overwhelming
underestimated
too good to be true.
sigh...love...

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  • 15 years ago

    by 0osomedayo0

    Thanks : ]] ill look at it again im glad u like it

  • 15 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    Woah. This is a really neat, little poem. I love it. I think its so true and well written.
    One suggestion though, perhaps you should switch the underestimating and the overwhelming? Idk it just seems to flow better that way, well to me anyways.
    But like I said, Great poem! (:

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