Oi man that is beautiful it almost made me cry it left me bretheless and speacjless i also lyk how u make quotes out of it aas well just brillent kk bie

Sad poem .. but it is very good

Awsome,i loved your poem(5/5)
It touched my heart,I came to know that you have very strong emotions.
I would like that you read my poems,and leave some comments,i would love if you mark any corrections for me,as i am new,words from your side will mea alot to me.
Rate my poems as well.
If you like me,then add me to your favourites
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Will look forward for your comments and rating on my poems.

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
Love

This poem touched me, it really really did, it was so sweet and pure. it is just so great and amazing. I am glad you wrote and posted this poem

it is lovely

Such a touching poem. well written and pure. Raw emotion. Keep it up.

victoria