Aw..sad..

im not sure if like the style is any good. like i prefer poems in stanzas mstly, but it was. good, but i thought this wasnt one of your bests...it didnt have the emotion the other of ur poems did...

but i liked it...
Aly

Yaa, good point about the stanzas. hmm.. maybee i'll touch it up a bit. it could use a bit of polishing. indeed. thankss for the help.

I like it.
Its good.
:)

I love this poem! You used great metaphors and it was very stable...awesome job!

Good poem lemonn heehee vent all you wantzzz =D

Thankeees i will. haha