Comments : Will you be my wife?

  • Ok at first i was like aww so cute. he proposed to her!! yay!(clap hands)

    but then i was crying becasue i read the last part..T_T..aww man sometimes being in love really sucks! i should know i've been there...but we have to move on...

    Your poem was simply flawless!! very well written. the emotion was clear (until the end T_T)
    No spelling errors at all. (clapping hands Xp)


  • 13 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    Man, I assume that you made almost every girl on this site would have a husband as sweet ... Too Gud am straight lool :)).

    Amazingly written and if you got to propose using this she will probably give u 5/5 first.

  • 13 years ago

    by TheRedWomanAndherBagofLife

    Good poem, but sometimes, words are not enuf for us women (exluding unappropriate and unfaithful activities)

    ....great poems doe....