Natalie, I love the structure of this poem. The stanza's seperated with two concentrated sentences.

Ingredients - youths, alcohol and cars equals death or serious injuries:

Figures published by the Department of Transport indicate that the number of people dying last year as a result of drink driving was 560 – a rise of six per cent. This happened in the context of an overall drop of one per cent in the total of road accident deaths. The figures further indicate that all casualties from drink driving leapt by seven per cent – more than 20,000 people killed or injured – which is the highest level since 1990.

^and that is just here in th U.K

Oops, I forgot to vote? *blush*

My support always x

Great job nataile. keep it up.5/5
**harlea

Wonderful work. You've got my vote and i hope i have yours!

~Chinwe~
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Wonderful work. You've got my vote and i hope i have yours!

~Chinwe~
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One of the best poems i've read in this site. i understand most people ignore it. may be your poem is too strong for them. each line of this poem is just outstanding. hats off to your poetic talent. absolutely awesome!!!!