This poem has a profound begining and a seemingly romantic ending or begining which ever way the reader prefers.
It reflects a cycle of beautiful life and death
merging into dimentions of the bliss of rebirth
well done

I liked this. It was very beautiful. Again, the rhyming was great. It seems like that's what your poems mostly are. Which is good, because your poems flow sooo easy. :) 5/5

An enjoyable read, and a truism told. The first two rhymes are off a bit (but that is me). I feel the rhythm is off in the last stanza but could be helped by dropping "Patient"( I think "patience" ?)
As always an opinion.

Aw anthony is a romantic. who woulda thunk? haha but seriously....good. it flows very nicely. i admire that you take so much time and thought into your poems. i just rush through them and say what's simply on my mind. i like it. noice