Awesome story its like the movie UNDERWORLD but if the story is written by you it will sound better

Great job, really enjoyed it.
Twilight fan?

Whoa!!!..
That was excellent...
You are obviuosly a twilight Fan..
^_^..
Good job..
5/5

Vampires and Werewolves are crazy cool
('vv') and (I don't know how to make a werewolf)

Love it!! love the idea of being a vampire haha! awesome! 5/5

Wow i enjoyed reading thid i like it