Yes, this is love, something with a great cost, your title caught my eye and i liked your poem. I loved how you showed the pain of having love.

I loved that poem<3

Very emotionally written a sad poem of love. nicely measured lines and a good flow make this poem interesting!

This poem is amazing and you're an awsome writer! And we can feel real pain because of love by reading it! Finally i wanna thank u for ur comment and well done!

This poem is amazing and you're an awsome writer! And we can feel real pain because of love by reading it! Finally i wanna thank u for ur comment and well done!

This poem is amazing and you're an awsome writer! And we can feel real pain because of love by reading it! Finally i wanna thank u for ur comment and well done!

This poem is amazing and you're an awsome writer! And we can feel real pain because of love by reading it! Finally i wanna thank u for ur comment and well done!

This poem is amazing and you're an awsome writer! And we can feel real pain because of love by reading it! Finally i wanna thank u for ur comment and well done!

This poem is amazing and you're an awsome writer! And we can feel real pain because of love by reading it! Finally i wanna thank u for ur comment and well done!

Very nice poem. It captures the anguish and frustration that comes with love.

Beatiful one
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thanx for the comments
i'll write all your poems

Omg. i truly love this poem. it is amazing. i can totally relate to this poem. (:

Awww...this is a really sad poem.
very touching. 5/5

"I look to the stars at night and wonder
why i have this anger inside, this thunder
i feel my heart,sad and full of rage
i fell trapped inside, i feel i am in a cage"

^^ Third & fourth lines -- your I's should be capitalized. Third line -- a space is needed after the comma. The fourth line -- should "fell" be "feel"?

"i close my eyes, for a moment ,i dream
and send wishes in the sky like a beam
i feel the heart talking to someone above
he blame me for he fell in love"

^^ Again, I's should be capitalized. First line -- remove the space after "moment", and add a space after the comma.

"i don't know what to do , i am much in pain
i sit silently waiting , but it is all in vain
this hurt wont be gone , he is here to stay
i enjoyed my love ,and it is time now to pay"

^^ I's should be capitalized. First line -- remove the space after "do". Second line -- remove the space after "waiting". Fourth line -- remove the space after "love" and add a space after the comma.

Overall; This was a very good piece. I liked the meaning behind it. :]

5/5

-Briana

WOW that was wonderful!!!! and what i learned is that love is a battle feild!! lolz 5/5

I love it agien you are good at this and have alot of tallent.

Ei, i think that poem completely fits for me. love will always be love.

Nothing to be pay but to return the favor of being loved! nice one! 5/5