Wow, this was really good.keep it up.5/5
**harlea

I can not tell if this is the best of your works, but it impressed me a lot so far.
I am not going to analyse every single verse that you wrote, sorry, but I still want to tell you that you have my respect. Thank you for sharing =)

This is so powerfull and I loved the way you explain in details the many ways to do it great poem 5/5

Tammi,

I liked the visualization from this poem,you painted a very dark picture indeed.5/5

That was very blunt. Maybe it should've been under "dark" poems. This was very powerful.

FABULOUS(5/5)
I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
Love
Junaid

Wow, really good, add my name to the list. lol. 5/5.

This was amazing!
Niice work.

5/5

First of all, the title is indeed catchy.. just felt like i had to read this. such a delecate subjet.
the begining just captivated me.

*Do what you wish with this,
For it can only be used once.
Die with it in your hands,
Or leave it in the dust.*

the image given,its as if, the poem were read not by computer.. but by paper by someone. its what i imagine.

**Drain as much blood as you can,
If a slow death is what you wish.
Take a razor or a knife,
That is one way to end your life. **
then you begin to give the numerous ways, which it can be done. This one, in my opinion, touched me the most. because i ve gone through this. [not personally.. but from someone] the way you described it, its horrible.. but somewhat courageous. i don't know how to explain.. i can't seem to find the words.

*Jump off somewhere high,
If the attention of death is what you want.
Have your body splattered on the sidewalk,
Just as little kids walk to school. * that was shocking, but true. Love the way you put this way of suicide with - attention- and then talking about kids.. just amplifies it.

*This is your guide to suicide,
Choose how you want to die.
This book has been checked out thousands of times,
And another name is added to the list of people who want to die. *

this part seems to go with the first. I've never read a poem like this one. very unique.. but daring.
the poem was hard to read.. afraid of what you were going to say next.
brillant piece..
no doubt a 5/5 , and one of my favourit poems by far here...

A really scary poem btw, but totally awesome. hmmmm which option is the best.....................

5/5

Good advice,I'll take all that into consideration ;) 5/5

Hit me like a hammer.
You're very talented.
xx

Wow,
such a strong spoken poem,
wording and everything was wonderful,
and yes i agree with Holleia tass u got talent,
yes indeed, it was sad but and very good poem, and i say if anyone said other ways,
then they dont know wat the hell they are tlaking about. great job 5/5 best poem yet of urs that i have read.

"This is your guide to suicide,
Choose how you want to die.
This book has been checked out thousands of times,
And another name is added to the list of people who want to die."

my favorite stanza. I loved the mysterious, deep, dreary imagery you conveyed in each stanza. mindblowing ending, it almost seemed like a suicidal petition...well done. 5/5

Whoah!!!
This is quite confronting-but very well done.

Again-very diff. from some of your other stuff-but brilliant all the same.

Love how you incorporated it into a book being checked out-very clever.

Very insightful and well done.

5/5 (yet again ;)

aish
xoxo

I didnt like the idea of givin desperate people ways to commit suicide..i felt that was mean somehow!!..but nicely written..

F**k i Like this Sounds Like Some Thing I Tried Sadly Here I Am Living This Sadd Thing i Call My Life Lol But I Like it Its Well Writen And Yea

I wa scompletely blown away
Oh, I don't want to die but I might just have second thoughts and cosider this guide to suicide