Pure simplicity, Though it makes me wonder if it is about sharing verse and self in a place such as this site.

This is how I would comment on the pleasure and growth I enjoy daily since I first posted and It grows daily in insight and friendship. 5/5 once again

Nice job on this poetry form Ingrid,
Love Cindy

^of change come to me across^

An incomplete sentence forcing the syllable count....

^me to search deep within thus^

Again, an incomplete sentence as a result of forcing the syllable count..

I like the usage of poetic device. It is very mesmerising and penetrating.Well done. You've got my vote!