Thats beautiful Kayla...

I hope you get him back to stay, time will tell.

Thanks for sharing.

Kevin

Wow kayla this was really amazing...
I can totally relate to it and I think somehow everyone can, one way or another..
nicely done! :-D
kisses
betty

This was extremely well written.
Everything flowed perfectly and the emotion behind each and every line was powerful.
Amazing!
5/5

Wow!! a very well expressed poem i loved it! keep up the lovely work! =] the first stanza was amazing by the way!