Something's not right

by Kevin   Jun 14, 2008


Last night I laid down and closed my eyes
Sure enough I began to cry
Only this time I'm not real sure why.

Everything seems so perfect its unreal
theres nothing my heart needs time to heal
so that can't be my deal.

I don't understand when everything seems so right
is when I start to struggle all through the night
my aching heart feels like its just begun to fight.

Is it you heart that in so much pain
its b/c our heart is one,its causing mine to go insane
I'm here for you sunshine or rain.

So many confused emotions
It take all these new and rare commotions
My heart is hurting b/c of all the new motions

My love for you is no long there
You feel the same way but you don't care
Its my heart that is begging to tare

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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Very well put, I have a poem that's similar to this, and I understand. So beautiful with much emotion, great job 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    I love it!
    great job =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    Again, i love this poem, and i can relate to this one. You have a really good talent so don't ignore it!!
    another 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Pretty nice man

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow that was a deep poem. i like how u said u cried most guys cant admit that, or show that they cry, theres nothing wrong w/ that.btw love gives u alot of confused emotions.. well keep it up!! btw welcome to the site! 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23