This is cute, keep writing :)
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Wow this is really good out of the couple of Love poems i've read this is in my top 5! 5/5

Very smoothe flow and romantic content
I WOULD NOT CHANGE A THING

Very nice poem christina:) even though ur new at this your words are still rather good. keep it up nd make it deep as your love to jordan. p.s. dont forget to comment mine too:)

Awe, cute poem! i liked how u described ur heart. =] 5/5 totally, great job

~tia

"Together we can make it threw,"

Together we can make it through

"No one can effect this feeling I have for you,"

no one can affect this feeling

Apart from that little twitch, I liked what you have written.Can feel it comes straight from the heart..........I could go on but it takes me a while to digest words since I ain't a very good judge(lol),Anyways keep writing.

VERY NICE! COME ON...YOU HAVE BEEN WRITING LONGER THEN A FEW MONTHS!! GREAT JOB!

I have given you my heart,
Keep it safe in your hands.
Once it was broken,
But with you it has began to mend.
^^^
What i noticed most in this stanza was the last to lines, but the last words in them
Broken and Mend
I don't know it just got me. I really love it.

I have shown you a side,
that only one other has seen.
So whenever I say I love you,
That is truly what I mean.
^^^
I started feeling the emotion in this stanza.
It flowed wonderfully.
i loved what you are trying to get out.
Like you want him to know that this isn't a joke, it's real

So take my heart,
And give me yours.
Together we can make it threw,
This dangerous little world.
^^^
the emotion! the emotion! oh i love it!
This is so powerful yet sincere. it so
beautiful

With him it felt like a ball and chain.
But with you,
It feels like my feathers have grown back in,
And I can fly again.
^^^
i love the things you compared this stanza too.

No one can effect this feeling I have for you,
So stay true to me,
And I will be to you two.
^^^
I love this stanza. It's like...you are on the top of the world with him...and no one can change that.

So hugs and kisses,
X's and O's ,
Until I write again,
I want you to know.
^^^
the last line of this stanza threw me off a bit, but other than that...it is wonderful..
i love how you use X's & O's

Take my heart and keep it safe.
If it breaks again,
I don't know how long it will take.

.. For me to love again.
^^^
an excellent way to end the poem bravo.
I really want to see some more of your work

I like this poem even more than the other. it's very cute and really captures the emotions and reality of falling in love and loving someone else so much! keep writting!

-rothy

Very very sweet

I love that poem. good job.

Wow that's great keep up the good work

Hey I am liking your poem but not quite loving it. It has major potential; it doesn't flow in a swift rhythm. But great idea and overall a nice write.