Comments : Test of time..

  • 13 years ago

    by Rinji

    I really like that reading it I saw like the whole story in my head that's REALLY GOOD! It had a sorta zing to it the ending really closed it out nice too XD

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Your words flowed perfectly to express the way I feel also
    you know what I mean
    this line stood out for me
    "Marred by your lies and engulfed in the conflagration of our deceased love"

    Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    The ending to this poem was reallly nice.
    i like the expressions you used and the flow was nice :)

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Althought the pictures are wonderfull t see
    it was a little strange for me

    you have good expression and metaphores
    but for me the ryhming thing i adores

    i hope you work on it i trust in you
    and fix the lenght of paragraphs too

    it is a good one you have "done" i quote
    and for sure you deserve my vote:)