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I really like that reading it I saw like the whole story in my head that's REALLY GOOD! It had a sorta zing to it the ending really closed it out nice too XD
by Michael D Nalley
Your words flowed perfectly to express the way I feel also
you know what I mean
this line stood out for me
"Marred by your lies and engulfed in the conflagration of our deceased love"
The ending to this poem was reallly nice.
i like the expressions you used and the flow was nice :)
by Mister 47
Althought the pictures are wonderfull t see
it was a little strange for me
you have good expression and metaphores
but for me the ryhming thing i adores
i hope you work on it i trust in you
and fix the lenght of paragraphs too it is a good one you have "done" i quote
and for sure you deserve my vote:)