Dude this poem is cool :D

i like the anecdote like structure, but the second stanza is my fav :D

keep it up :P

I enjoyed this poem though it could put the "T" in tragedy
sounds like friday the thirteenth there
"We though it was safe"

well done

Cleverly written.

It's a unique poem - I liked it

Nice poem its very different
i doubt you will find another like
it although the rhyming was a bit forced
but otherwise HIGHFIVE =]

Haha, this was great. it was not only a poem but like a really good story. and i liked the topic too. my eyes were glued to the screen till the end, i swear it. :) nice read.

I like how different you made this poem. Your rhymes were consistent but weren't always needed, which is not bad, because I thought your ending worked very well with your theme. Overall I would say you did pretty good with this piece. Nice work.

Wow.. nice... like this one... good work!! =o