Comments : Falling through the cracks

  • 12 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    I can relate completely with this. it's very raw, but i think that actually works for this poem. you put your emotions into this very well, and i really liked it. good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...what an intense poem. I love how you're angry and sad at the same time. You express both emotions so well. Very nice work. Nik

  • 11 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    !!!!!!!!!!!! amaziinnnggg =))))))))))