Very nice poem! i hope that if this is the way you feel, remember you are still young and things seem bad at times. But they get better with time. so hang in there oaky? keep writing!

Good poem......
this is good. u sure write with feelings.......
5/5 for that......
keep writing.. =)

This is really good.
Very sad, but well written.
Good emotion and description-beautifully written.

Aish
xx