You write very well for your age! keep up the good work!

I didn't grasp infatuation from your poem
not in a since. your poem felt as if the "speaker" was making a rash decision
as if she wasn't thinking clearly. but
who am i to judge based on a title.
the poem it's self was fairly well written
i like the selfishness in the poem the
want to be the only one with him it
beings true human feelings into the mix.
I have read to many false felt love poems
that were nothing more than pretty words
i liked this poem and keep up the good
work.
thanks for the read
:~)Sam Mayo

This poem said everything. I could tell where you were coming from and how much you long for this person's love. It's amazing. I know how it is to be infatuated with someone. Great work, 5/5

This well written poem describes infatuation very well

I liked this one.
I think you should get rid of all the to's in there though. I think it would make the poem sound a lot better. And add more emotion to the poem
4/5