What I think of you

by Max Krakers   Jun 17, 2008


You look like an angel,
With skin made of snow.
Two eyes that look perfect,
Like diamonds they glow.

Your appearance entrancing,
Your voice like a blade.
Which cuts through the silence,
Where others would fade.

Your all that is lovely,
In all ways sublime.
Just one flaw I have found,
Which is, you're not mine.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    As far as the rhyme and flow are concerned this poem is very good. Sounds very compact. First and last stanza are very good. Second stanza is not that strong. That is what I felt. But overall it's very good.

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