Well i liked it but i think you had a few pretense problems like you would say were when it should have been was. reread it and you will see them. i really liked it but a little advice. just because things dont work out the way you doesnt mean he never cared. some things are just out of our hands. dont regret the time yall spent together, and dont regret the love you shared. remember, rejoice it, love it. dont hide it and hate it.
you live and you learn....

This really sounds a lot like me and my ex boyfriend...and it has been almost 2 years since we broke up and i found someone amazing so you will to :) 5/5