This is a really sweet poem, not as cliche as th title led me to expect, and i love the bit about how all love's perfect. i also like how its not to rambling or long - i prefer it to-the-pont, and this is :)

This was a really sweet, beautiful, love poem :) i don't think the flow was that great or anything but it worked.. nice job 5/5

Aww, sweetheart, this was beautiful. It's perfect for the summertime, especially, since it has that summer feel to it.

Although you talk of rules been broken and such, there's not really a negative thought in this piece at all. It's wonderful and beautiful. :)

Two sweethearts that fell in love. Young love is simply beautiful. This poem was good. Lots of us have experienced the "young love" feeling at one point in our lives. (: Great poem. 5/5.

Cute poem, but to me it sounded a little shallow and a bit too much like a country song. I suppose it is sweet, in its own way, and I like how you fit so much into so little words. The thing that really bothered me was that I could feel no emotion seeping through the words. Zero. Nada. Even with a narrative voice, a poem should have some feeling, and not just be a gray monotone that can't care less what the poem is about.