Wow, usually through rhymes like that don't capture me as much...but nice job Muse! It was beautifully written. It didn't feel forced, it felt naturally and flowing. Appropriate length to each line, nice touch with the repeating triplets. Beautiful!

And I hope you find what you're looking for!

Hey i really really love it ! 5/5 i hope love finds u soon..!

Loved this one... really captured the readers attetion

I think you just succeeded to capture my heart for a moment.. :)

The flow was a pleasant.

I can only say a "wow". You did this very well.

Amazing muse!!!!!

Nice poem...

Nice poem...