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by Adrian Loves Jenny Jun 18, 2008 category : Love, romance / first love
This is dedicated to my lovely, beautiful and amazing girlfriend <3 I love you baby girl <3<3 ---------------------------------------------------------------- I saw your hands I saw your feet I saw you smile Oh god, you're sweet. I saw you there, Sitting with your friend. And I really hoped, You'd be mine in the end. You looked at me With your beautiful eyes. The feeling inside, Was an amazing surprise. We had a great time You are the best, You're so much better Than all the rest. Late at night We sat in your bed, I looked at you With these thoughts in my head. I looked in your eyes I really needed this, I asked you a question And got a first kiss. The way that I felt I cannot explain, And all the feelings Just hit me like a train. You are the one That got the key to my heart, As long as you got it We will never be apart. I know it's a distance Between you and me, But as long as we don't give up We will always be. At this time I love you more than ever, I promise that my love for you Is always and forever. So baby girl i promise you That I will see you really soon, Cause when we are together You take me to the moon.* Please comment on my poem. I'm new, and need advice.. And I'd love a few votes .. Peace