Comments : Dear my future wife

  • 13 years ago

    by Ash

    Adel, you never fail to capture the readers heart with your simplicity and love.

    "We cannot know what tommorrow will bring,
    nor will we know when the lonely song we sing,
    will finally dissolve all wounds and pain,
    and that one true love in our hearts will reign.
    And yet hope and courage is all that we have,
    to draw us closer to that one for whom we pray."

    Take care and I hope and pray that Allah will guide you along the right path.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    wut shud I say ???

    well its reaally really good

    I really pray that u wud find the girl that u deserve....

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Let my heart dance out of happiness and relief
    Let it forget all its sorrow, pain and grief


    I will say amen to that, lol!
    A very original idea for a poem...who knows.. maybe your future wife will read this!

    Take care my sweet friend:)

    Love, Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by TheRedWomanAndherBagofLife

    "Dear my future wife, where are you now?
    Are you asleep waiting for your prince
    To wake you up by giving you a kiss
    Or are you trying to find me just like I do
    And shout between the crowds "WHERE ARE YOU?"

    aww.... that is true, its a situation we all find us self in...And I did say ameen too lol...May Allah help you find your future wife, and this time let her be with you...futhermore, may Allah help ALL OF US..finding our love...Say Ameen to that...

  • 13 years ago

    by osmish

    If you are the one that wrote that youself ,i tell you it is the most lovely poems i have read this year,good work

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    That was a such a lovely gesture n poem from the boy whom ppl say has a truly golden heart...

    This was marvellous Adel...

    Lved this one from u... n wish so the others n ur wife will love this if she wud read this one some day...

    Remember I still say... Someone, somewhere is reall made 4 u...

    Gud luck ur poems.. n ur words in the poem... all come true to u...


  • 13 years ago

    by Heba, this poem is really amazing.when i first saw the title i thought that you are engaged, but when i read it i felt they are just dreams,so are you really having a futuer wife or they are just dreams.
    otherwise, nice poem.
    sorry my comment came so late.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    The concept is very interesting. It's very sweet and romantic. A good poem of love and dream!

  • 13 years ago

    by NoUr


  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    Ive noticed some words that were forced to rhyme however didnt make a big impact at all. Ive noticed as well the irregular format of each stanza and it looked better and original. I liked the atmosphere of this piece, somehow light humorous. Good job..