by Ash
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Adel, you never fail to capture the readers heart with your simplicity and love. |
by Meme
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Hmmmm |
by Ingrid
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Let my heart dance out of happiness and relief |
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"Dear my future wife, where are you now? |
by osmish
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If you are the one that wrote that youself ,i tell you it is the most lovely poems i have read this year,good work |
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That was a such a lovely gesture n poem from the boy whom ppl say has a truly golden heart... |
by Heba
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Amen.wow, this poem is really amazing.when i first saw the title i thought that you are engaged, but when i read it i felt they are just dreams,so are you really having a futuer wife or they are just dreams. |
by Sourav
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The concept is very interesting. It's very sweet and romantic. A good poem of love and dream! |
by NoUr
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..AMEN.. |
by The Queen
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Ive noticed some words that were forced to rhyme however didnt make a big impact at all. Ive noticed as well the irregular format of each stanza and it looked better and original. I liked the atmosphere of this piece, somehow light humorous. Good job.. |