Comments : Let The past Be Our Present

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "...it reminded me of those night"
    -night - -> nights.

    i love the title. wow.. 'let the past be our present' that was perfect for this poem. great write, very sweet.. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Oh. I wish it continued. The idea was brilliant. that poem itself was sweet and soothing. Tad saddening. I adored it. =] I do believe your poetry is growing in quality and quantity.=]

    Only thing I found wrong in here was distance...you spelled it distence.

    =] well I need to go. Talk to you later!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem is very touching... Lovers...being far away from each others.. Memories...sweet memories.. Tears in eyes... Missing...

    Loving your girl...your gameel gamal...beauty..

    Yes, give good memories is the best present one can ever give.

  • 11 years ago

    by Forever His Sunshine

    Veyr good :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Meuser

    Very, very, very, nice piece. I really like the way you wrote this. You have a lot of talent here.

  • 11 years ago

    by Montgomery

    Very imaginative. You summoned a very dear, lovely and picturesque moment from your history. And, like an artist, you painted a fresh picture framed by longing and hope. We all know what that feels like.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very descriptive by nature, this poem is certainly very emotional. Well written... Good work!