Comments : Unaware

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love free verse I aways envy those who can make a beautiful poem flow without a rhyme scheme as you have

    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aw, I really liked this one. It flowed nicely and I loved the words that you used to describe everything. :) I'm sorry that I don't have anything else to say, I'm in a hurry!! lol

    [5/5]

    ~Kail

  • 15 years ago

    by Rinji

    I like this it was very well written a nice pros poem XD

  • 15 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    I loved it
    Great poem
    So very sweet
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    I loved it
    Great poem
    So very sweet
    5/5