Good poem I know how that feels 5/5
Rachelle

Im sorry. but great poem. i give it a 5/5

A well written poem, for 14 you are very good at expressing yourself and your choice of words are very mature well done,

That was really deep, full of emotion like: ^^trying to mend the wounds you ripped open
i long for silence to fill air
because you left me^^; WOW! that was beutiful, but very sad. 5/5

Wow....i liked it....it was sad, but to me sad poems make the best poems......your good....keep writing!!
:-)

5/5

This was a beauitful poem. quite sad but yet so pure and so heartfelt. it was simply lovely.
very expressive and i loved the detail. i loved it. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.