Comments : Don't act like you know me

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow, I really like how you don't use any rhyme because it keeps the reader focused on the subject. Most of mine are rhyme, only because I'm addicted to it lol and sometimes the message is lost. I really like the last two lines. I cant really explain why but I just really like them. I love the title as well.

    All in all it was excellent.
    Soda E>

  • 15 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Time to think...
    Time to bleed...
    Time to learn...

    Very nice marry me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    This was a good poem and even though it had no rhyme it still kept to what it was talking about. I liked the emotion. Keep it up.