Comments : Fate

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a very deep and powerful poem.
    you did a wonderful job with this one.
    loved it.
    keep up the nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    This is a moving poem.
    "From the hate it tore" is a very visual line, it's imaginitive.
    5/5 hun :]