Midnight lover

by Joseph R Hanna   Jun 22, 2008


The hand strikes twelve
I see her in the moon light
my heart is filled with delve
I see her in the moon light
I go to her the mist fades
the midnight servant wakens me
I dream of the midnight lover

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    It kinda confused me when u keep saying midnight but i liked it. nicely done. the flow was alrite. 4/5 for me

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Awww! Thats great! I love it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Alexis

    Aww..
    that's adoreable :]

    Keep up your writing,
    its beautiful.
    5/5
    :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww....how sweet!!!!

    <3 Aly

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Good poem =)