My goodness what alovely free verse write.I have a huge problem with the state of the world at the moment so very well done i really enjoyed your poem

A very sad story with an evil twist at the end. It shocked me, so It certainly caused a reaction.

You have described the emotion very well, creating wonderful images.

Well done

Michael

Wow thats so strange, as you say?? but maybe we were meant to talk?lol,anyway well written too, Xp

This is a very gripping write Chrystal .
I had to spend a moment or two just to recover . thank you for sharing 5/5

Wasn't expecting the end. Very good write, with a twist at the end.

This is a very touching piece with a twist at the end, thank you for sharing this piece with us…may you find peace and joy deep with in your heart once again soon.

sadaddy

Oh my gosh,
all I can say is WOW,
This was such an amazing and insightful poem.
It really made me think a lot
about what is going on in the world and the
pain that people are facing by losing their
loved ones to war.
There was so much passion in this poem
You gave an outstanding over view which expresses the pain that
the world has to offer
with things such as war.
Great job!!

The poem is truly great, it keeps the reader guessing whats next.... it deals with tragic love, irony and a current event that affects us all.... it's a great piece of work... the ending deals a powerful shock which makes the poem perfect...

Oh my God that was real nice!!!!!!

Somthing a lot of familys deal with, it touched me and made me think a lot about if that day comes for me and that letter gets sent. Very well written and soulful. -Charles

This is such a heart wrenching, sad poem and the ending was unexpected. It was like a "punch in the gut".