Deep....awesome.....LOVE IT!!!!!

I like it a lot. i no how you feel. 5/5

I beleive that to, "fairy tales" are just jokes! 5/5

I know how you feel. there is no such think as happily ever after. i love it. you did a great job.

I love the idea but i have to disagree with those the above me fairy-tales can be real you just have to look in the right places. other then that i have 2 say i think this would be better if it were to have some rhyming scheme to it. a good poem to read all the same
Raindrops 4/5