I really like this poem. i can see that your poems flow, and in the end turn into a beautiful poem.
:] its great

Isn't love just great especialy when it invokes a beautiful poen like this.very well written
Grant

This is a really beautiful poem. i like it because it's a little quirky, like sometimes things don't always fit into place perfectly. and i guess that's why your poem is beautiful, because love isn't always perfect and things don't always fall into place like you'd hoped, but still the feeling of being in love makes everything better again, and that's why love is perfect.

Youre an amazing poet keep it up

i love it

:)

This was poetic and well-written. Keep it up, you're a natural! :D
5/5

Love,
Tina

Nice one, words don't come easy when trying to compose or put them to paper Yet you have obviously shared love and perhaps if it as deep as your poem it was easy as your love makes it so. Its the editing I find difficult. Definitely a D: 5/5

Awww that poem was so... cute lol you did good