This is a such a funny, light hearted poem written with simplicity I loved it , I read it three times before I commented and smiled all the way 5/5

How I enjoyed this. I can picture such a child. You must have some of your own to know how they are haha.
You did this with perfect rhyme.

Salman.s@nespakerp.com

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
Love

This is a poem that made me smile and for that I am greatful.

The flow is good and rhyme too! You have written about a little boy and I can relate to this, having been one and also having a 7 year old myself.

Thank you again.

Michael

Hee hee hee hee!!!! how cute and funny. nice job. i give it a 5/5

Like it ..very cute

I like this poem
its werid but really cool

I like this poem
its werid but really cool

A cute whimsical poem and quite funny.well done

Grant

Cute and funny write...that made me smile ,and one I relate to as I have 3 boys myself so I know what boys can be like.

Hello Crystal! , havent commented 4 a while.This is a BRILLIANT poem, about a typical wee boy...full of mischief. It made me SMILE..no ends..i just LOVED it!!! Lookin 4ward to readin more. LOL

Cute and so typical of children. Brought a smile to my face this morning as I read. Thanks for that and for writing such a lighthearted piece. Brought back memories of when I was a child and did things like this. Good work.