Wow such raw and strong emotion!
very clear yet layered!
I like this a lot ... 5/5
keep it up!

*tackles you in an amazingly big bear hug.*
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*cries hysterically.*
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KRIS!!!
this poem was breath-taking, amazing, beautiful, phenomenal, and i could go on and on. i absolutely loved every single stanza, line, word, and letter of it.
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in my opinion i like someone hard to find.
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kris, i love you. and i want u to know that from the bottom of my heart. i want to be a help to you but i just dont know what to do.
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5/5 kris!
ilyvm.
mackenzie
[your little sister.]

This was extremly good! i.loved.it. 5/5

This poem is just outstanding....I really enjoy reading your work so please dont ever stop writing!!!! 5/5

*takes a breath*
wow.
sweetie this is AMA-ZA-ZA-ZING!!
i love every word.
i only hate that its coming from you.
i really hope everything is okay.
:/
i miss you so so so so so so so much sweetie.
pm me.. tell me whats going on. i want to be here to help you
i love you so very much my ray of hope!
<3Ashley